With regard to the tone of your essays, you must ensure that the admissions committees readily recognize your certainty and self-confidence. Being clear and direct about who you are and how you envision your future is vital. Consider the following basic examples:<\/p>\n
Weak:<\/strong> “I now have adequate work experience and hope to pursue an MBA.”<\/p>\n Strong:<\/strong> “Through my work experience, I have gained both breadth and depth, providing me with a solid, practical foundation for pursuing my MBA.”<\/p>\n ——<\/p>\n Weak:<\/strong> “I now want to pursue an MBA.”<\/p>\n Strong:<\/strong> “I am certain that now is the ideal time for me to pursue my MBA.”<\/p>\n ——<\/p>\n Weak:<\/strong> “I have good quantitative skills and will succeed academically.”<\/p>\n Strong:<\/strong> “I have already mastered the quantitative skills necessary to thrive in my MBA studies.”<\/p>\n ——<\/p>\n