{"id":5330,"date":"2011-04-11T08:28:12","date_gmt":"2011-04-11T12:28:12","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.mbamission.com\/blog\/?p=5330"},"modified":"2022-02-07T14:16:41","modified_gmt":"2022-02-07T19:16:41","slug":"monday-morning-essay-tip-two-are-better-than-one-gender-neutrality","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.mbamission.com\/blog\/monday-morning-essay-tip-two-are-better-than-one-gender-neutrality\/","title":{"rendered":"Monday Morning Essay Tip: Two Are Better than One (Gender Neutrality)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>English, thankfully, is a language without many gender-related  problems, but some do exist, and being gender neutral in MBA application  essays can be important. In general, a key way to avoid such problems  is to pluralize\u2014to talk about groups rather than individuals. Consider the  following examples:<\/p>\n<p>a. \u201cToday\u2019s manager must be financially literate to do his job well.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>b. \u201cToday\u2019s manager must be financially literate to do his\/her job well.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>c. \u201cToday\u2019s managers must be financially literate to do their job well.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>In (a), the sentence is poor because it is not gender neutral. Simply put, avoid writing \u201chis\u201d and assuming that the manager is a man. When  you are talking about a hypothetical manager and don\u2019t know that  manager\u2019s gender, you cannot assume the manager is a man any more than  you can assume she is a woman.<\/p>\n<p>Sentence (b) is better because it shows that the writer is sensitive  to gender issues and, therefore, has made sure to insert \u201c\/her\u201d after  \u201chis.\u201d However, using \u201chis\/her,\u201d \u201chim\/her,\u201d \u201che\/she\u201d (or \u201cs\/he\u201d) and  other such constructions can make essays unnecessarily cumbersome and  can also disrupt an essay\u2019s style or rhythm for the reader.<\/p>\n<p>Sentence (c) is, therefore, the best of the three sentences. Words  that entail gender considerations when singular lose such considerations  when pluralized: \u201chis\/her\u201d becomes \u201ctheir,\u201d \u201chim\/her\u201d becomes \u201cthem,\u201d  \u201che\/she\u201d or \u201cs\/he\u201d becomes \u201cthey.\u201d Pluralizing gender-laden pronouns  will allow you to avoid this awkward problem\u2014and, as you may have  noticed, will save word count as well.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>English, thankfully, is a language without many gender-related problems, but some do exist, and being gender neutral in MBA application essays can be important. In general, a key way to avoid such problems is to pluralize\u2014to talk about groups rather than individuals. 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