{"id":5121,"date":"2011-03-21T08:12:49","date_gmt":"2011-03-21T14:12:49","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.mbamission.com\/blog\/?p=5121"},"modified":"2022-02-07T14:16:41","modified_gmt":"2022-02-07T19:16:41","slug":"monday-morning-essay-tip-taking-responsibility","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.mbamission.com\/blog\/monday-morning-essay-tip-taking-responsibility\/","title":{"rendered":"Monday Morning Essay Tip: Taking Responsibility"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Candidates who have an obvious weakness\u2014such as a low GPA or GMAT score or a prolonged gap in work experience\u2014often worry that they are  destined to attend a virtually anonymous business school. Whenever such  applicants ask admissions officers how their weakness  might affect their candidacy, they hear the straightforward and common  refrain \u201cWe look at applications holistically.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Although this may sound like a clich\u00e9, it is certainly the truth; at  mbaMission, we have seen dozens of candidates with sub-600 GMAT scores  and GPAs under 3.0 find their respective ways into top-ten programs. The  key to overcoming an academic weakness\u2014or indeed any weakness in your candidacy\u2014is to  address it in the optional essay, not with excuses, but by taking  responsibility:<\/p>\n<p>Example 1:<\/p>\n<p>\u201c<em>In my first year of college, I had the flu the day before my  midterms and did quite badly on my first batch. You will notice that my  grades dip in my first term. Then, in the second term, I was quite engaged in  extracurricular activities with my fraternity and again, my grades  suffered. However, if you look at my grades in  my major, from my second year forward, I would have a GPA of\u2026\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Some who read this sample paragraph may laugh at the absurdity  of the excuses; others may not even notice. While solid explanations for a dip in a candidate\u2019s grades certainly exist, a  temporary flu and overinvolvement in extracurriculars are not among  them.<\/p>\n<p>Example 2:<\/p>\n<p>\u201c<em>As a freshman at XYZ University, I was unable to appreciate the  rather awesome educational opportunities before me, and my grades were,  quite simply, lower than they should have been. However, by my second  year, when I discovered my passion for English literature and chose this  subject as my major, I pursued my studies with vigor and completely  turned my academic performance around, earning a consistent stream of  As in<\/em>\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n<p>In this second example, the excuses are cast aside and replaced with a  contrite discussion of the candidate\u2019s experience. As a result, the  candidate establishes credibility, explains the change and infers that  he\/she will continue to perform as an MBA student.<\/p>\n<p>Admissions committees, like corporate America, don&#8217;t like excuses. Don\u2019t make them.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Candidates who have an obvious weakness\u2014such as a low GPA or GMAT score or a prolonged gap in work experience\u2014often worry that they are destined to attend a virtually anonymous business school. 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