{"id":4313,"date":"2010-12-20T09:39:46","date_gmt":"2010-12-20T14:39:46","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.mbamission.com\/blog\/?p=4313"},"modified":"2022-02-07T14:16:42","modified_gmt":"2022-02-07T19:16:42","slug":"monday-morning-essay-tip-the-passive-voice","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.mbamission.com\/blog\/monday-morning-essay-tip-the-passive-voice\/","title":{"rendered":"Monday Morning Essay Tip: The Passive Voice"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Many writers choose to use the passive voice in their  essays, yet the best writers rarely, if ever, use this technique.<\/p>\n<p>The passive voice puts the verb in the wrong place in the sentence, thereby removing the \u201caction.\u201d Subjects become <em>acted upon<\/em> rather than <em>performing<\/em> actions. Sentences with the passive voice\u00a0typically\u00a0include\u00a0verb  phrases like \u201cwas\u201d or \u201chas been\u201d (e.g.: \u201cit was determined,\u201d \u201cthere has been\u201d).<\/p>\n<p>Consider this example of the passive voice:<\/p>\n<p><em>\u201cThe marathon was run despite my injury.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p>In this sentence, the verb (or action) is diminished because the  writer says the marathon \u201cwas run.\u201d A better way of describing the same  activity is to use the active voice, as illustrated in this example:<\/p>\n<p><em>\u201cI ran the marathon despite my injury.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Below\u00a0are two more examples:<\/p>\n<p><strong>Passive:<\/strong> <em>\u201cThe contract was awarded to us.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p><strong>Active:<\/strong> <em>\u201cWe won the contract.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p><strong>Passive:<\/strong> <em>\u201cIt was decided that I would be in charge of the project.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p><strong>Active:<\/strong> <em>\u201cMy boss selected me to be in charge of the project.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Remember\u2014you are at the center of\u00a0your essays! The best way  to tell your stories and explain your accomplishments is by making  sure that you are the catalyst of the stories you tell. Using the active  voice ensures that the admissions committees see you as an active person who makes things happen.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Many writers choose to use the passive voice in their essays, yet the best writers rarely, if ever, use this technique. The passive voice puts the verb in the wrong place in the sentence, thereby removing the \u201caction.\u201d Subjects become acted upon rather than performing actions. 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