In your MBA application essays, you must ensure that the tone you use allows the admissions committee to readily recognize your certainty and self-confidence. Being clear and direct about who you are and how you envision your future is vital. Consider the following example statements:<\/p>\n
Weak:\u00a0\u201cI now have adequate work experience and hope to pursue an MBA.\u201d<\/p>\n
Strong:\u00a0\u201cThrough my work experience, I have gained both breadth and depth, providing me with a solid, practical foundation for pursuing my MBA.\u201d<\/p>\n
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Weak:\u00a0\u201cI now want to pursue an MBA.\u201d<\/p>\n
Strong:\u00a0\u201cI am certain that now is the ideal time for me to pursue my MBA.\u201d<\/p>\n
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Weak:\u00a0\u201cI have good quantitative skills and will succeed academically.\u201d<\/p>\n
Strong:\u00a0\u201cI have already mastered the quantitative skills necessary to thrive in my MBA studies.\u201d<\/p>\n
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Weak:\u00a0\u201cWith my MBA, I hope to establish myself as a leader.\u201d<\/p>\n
Strong:\u00a0\u201cI am certain that with my MBA, I will propel myself to the next levels of leadership.\u201d<\/p>\n
The key in all these examples is the use of language that clearly projects self-confidence; instead of \u201chope,\u201d use \u201cwill\u201d; rather than saying you have \u201cgood\u201d skills, show \u201cmastery.\u201d Although you should avoid sounding arrogant, by being assertive and direct, you will inspire confidence in your reader and ensure that you make a positive impression.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"