{"id":10562,"date":"2012-12-17T09:49:41","date_gmt":"2012-12-17T15:49:41","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.mbamission.com\/blog\/?p=10562"},"modified":"2022-02-07T14:15:40","modified_gmt":"2022-02-07T19:15:40","slug":"monday-morning-essay-tip-present-your-standout-accomplishments-first","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.mbamission.com\/blog\/monday-morning-essay-tip-present-your-standout-accomplishments-first\/","title":{"rendered":"Monday Morning Essay Tip: Present Your Standout Accomplishments First"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>When\u00a0preparing personal statements\u00a0that\u00a0require significant information about career progress (for Chicago Booth, Kellogg or Wharton, for example), many applicants choose to discuss their accomplishments in chronological order. Although the simplicity of this approach makes it attractive, we encourage you to consider an alternative\u2014showcasing more recent and thus potentially stronger accomplishments first. By choosing this latter approach, you may capture your reader&#8217;s imagination more quickly\u00a0and reduce the risk of being lost amid similar candidates.<\/p>\n<p>Consider the examples of a software analyst who is now a project manager, managing a budget and leading a team of\u00a020 programmers,\u00a0and of an investment banking analyst who is now in his\/her third year with a company and has been sent abroad to work directly with a CFO:<\/p>\n<p><strong>The Project Manager:<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Chronological: \u201cJoining ABC Technology as a software programmer, I\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Reverse: \u201cScrutinizing my plan one last time, I waited to present my team\u2019s $3.7M proposal to our client\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n<p><strong>The Investment Banker:<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Chronological: \u201cAs an investment banking analyst at Deutsche Bank, I started\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Reverse: \u201cArriving in Taipei, I was admittedly nervous to finally meet the CFO of XYZ Co. and lead my firm\u2019s due diligence process\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n<p>In these examples, the candidates immediately present their standout accomplishments and thrust the reader into the excitement of their stories. Although this kind of reverse introduction is not \u201call purpose,\u201d it can be a\u00a0feasible option\u00a0in many circumstances. Still, in choosing this approach, the candidate must also be able to fluidly return to earlier moments in his\/her career later in the essay\u2014a task that requires creativity and skill.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>When\u00a0preparing personal statements\u00a0that\u00a0require significant information about career progress (for Chicago Booth, Kellogg or Wharton, for example), many applicants choose to discuss their accomplishments in chronological order. Although the simplicity of this approach makes it attractive, we encourage you to consider an alternative\u2014showcasing more recent and thus potentially stronger accomplishments first. 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